Friday, 11 December 2015

Diary

                                                             Oh!!I am the diary 
                                        you write every day.
I am the page you scar every day.
I don’t mind being hurt by your pen.
I hate when you hide tears every day.

I hate when you fake the smile.
Oh I am the mirror of your mind.
I am your reactions of everyday life.
I am the companion you created for the life.
In solitude or loneliness,
I am the friend you talk with every day.
I am the diary you write every day.
I am the imprints of your past.

I am the dreams that you cast.
I am witness of your blood stained hands,
That murdered your dreams in past.
Oh! I am the blood prints you write every day.
  I am the dream you hide every day.
I am the diary you write everyday.
                                                       ~Ajay
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11 comments:

  1. Unknown12 December 2015 at 02:23

    I like the way you put your poetic thoughts together. The last stanza was a bit abrupt with the blood part, though. It took me places I was not ready for and did not really want to go.

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  2. Ajay12 December 2015 at 02:31

    I sorry for that...and thank u for reading and publishing your nice review.....it means a lot...thanks..:)

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  3. Ajay12 December 2015 at 02:32

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  4. vincent f. a. golphin12 December 2015 at 06:40

    The poem is deeply moving. I would make the last stanza the first one. That would give the reader a sharper access to the deeper feelings behind the diary metaphor. BTW, it might have been the trick of the eye or something, but I am glad you corrected the spelling for diary.

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  5. Ajay12 December 2015 at 08:12

    I think that poem should end with something give...thats why i kept the last stanza last...thanks for commenting..its nice to be appreciated..and ya i corrected the spelling of diary...:)

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  6. Ajay12 December 2015 at 08:12

    I think that poem should end with something give...thats why i kept the last stanza last...thanks for commenting..its nice to be appreciated..and ya i corrected the spelling of diary...:)

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  7. Unknown12 December 2015 at 10:22

    Good job Mr. Author....the way you conceive your feelings into the words is simply awesome... :)

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  8. Ajay12 December 2015 at 10:34

    Thank u...:)comments like these makes my day...frankly speaking i if people understand and appreciate your work....its always awesome....and for a 6month old writer like me...its a lot of motivation to keep writing..thank u...:)

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  9. Unknown7 January 2016 at 14:37

    Did I not tell u in the beginning that u should not lose hope and keep writing... I am glad that u have finally got an audience... Keep up the good work I know u will go far buddy :-)

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  10. Ajay7 January 2016 at 23:48

    I dont really have a audiance..but i m building one...and its because of you guys....thanks for motivating....:)

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  11. Ajay7 January 2016 at 23:48

    I dont really have a audiance..but i m building one...and its because of you guys....thanks for motivating....:)

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